In Love

In Love

A Poem by SugarlessGiRL

My heart can’t speak the words it wants to say

My mind can’t comprehend what my emotions are

These thoughts are like emotions

They coarse through my mind and body

Love struck like lightning

My heart pounds like thunder

There’s a storm in my soul

My eyes won’t clear up

The sight ahead is foggy

The words you talk

I can taste them in the air around us

Incased in a bubble

Sharing the same oxygen

Holding our breathes afraid to run out of it

Enclosed in our hands are our hearts

Pulsing through our veins

Love stained blood

Dripping from the spaces between our fingers

Strings of red tied to each other

Holding us together

Holding hands

Heart to heart conversations

Words that come from not our minds

Sentences that come from the soul

Nameless stories told through the night

Combined and tied together our fate is

Unbroken the strings around hold strong

Small but intense knots tied into our grips

We hold onto each other

Transferring love through our warmth

Speaking with our eyes alone

Nowhere else to look

Towards each other

Straightforward and honest

Gazes never straying

Unmoving and held in place

Our feet are glued as our eyes are

The color red wraps around us

Incased in an unopened box

Shut tightly and closed firmly

We’re forced to lean closer

A force that was nothing more than a gentle push

Towards each other we fall

In love~

© 2010 SugarlessGiRL


Author's Note

SugarlessGiRL
The first love poem I've ever wrote actually being in love~ isn't that weird? and love poems are my specialty and usually the only thing I write~!

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I love the end...it's a pretty normal poem. Good Write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow this is the best love poem i have ever read. This is so beautiful. It really makes me wanna cry. I feel like this every time i am with my girlfriend. This is so beyond sweet. And amazing. Excellent job. The imagery itself just takes over the senses.

Posted 13 Years Ago


its amazin! love it!! happy you have finaly found love! just hope its with the right person! love ya miss ya!


Posted 14 Years Ago



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SugarlessGiRL
SugarlessGiRL

Nirai Kanai, I come from happiness, FL



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Well... for starters I'm Japanese obssessed, Anime and Manga obssessed, Gyaru obssessed, and Vocaloid obssessed. Rin and Len Kagamine to be exact! I can say that just about anything I ever write is no.. more..

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