Walking to a Brighter Life

 

When I walk forward

I feel like I'm going faster than I am

What passes by me I don't care

The pain that was in my back

It's behind me now

It's gone where I'm not

It's where I was and where I left from

Where I'm going I still don't know

My destination unknown and my surroundings unseen

What's here around me?

Not even my eyes can see

It's uncomprehending to me

So why do I try?

To understand this life...

I'll just keep walking though

As long as it goes by

I can make it through the night

Following the moon in it's shine

Waiting for the suns light

Where are the warm rays?

I still don't know

I'm walking on and on until the rise of sun in my future

Ahead of me the breeze blows

I believe though

The winds are only as cold as the moon glows

In my steps, I keep myself warm

Safe from all harm

Unstoppable is my path

As I plow through the snow

Deeper and deeper I go

I reach for the light of day

The color of the night

Let it fade away

In my footsteps

Bring me to a brighter life

Author's Note

Plz review because I am really into this poem but I really would like to know some thoughts on it from others views! plz and thx!!!

Reviews

[Eden]

It's good, I like it... :)