Childhood Tree

Childhood Tree

A Poem by MiguelAngeles

I have seen everything there is to see.
The vastness and beauty of life
from the laughter of children to
the scars they have given me.

© 2013 MiguelAngeles


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Interesting poem, especially the last line throws the reader off. But why choose 'vastness and beauty' in the second line if you talk of both positive and negative elements of life? Beauty obviously connects with laughter of children, but what are you hinting at with vastness, is that the scars?

Posted 11 Years Ago

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Added on May 29, 2013
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MiguelAngeles
MiguelAngeles

Newark, CA



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My name is Miguel Angeles. I am a student at Saint Mary's College of California and when I get inspired I write out a quick poem. I started writing poetry every so often because I had an English 5 cl.. more..

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