Charlie
Fly the plane
Me and You

Me and You

A Poem by Light
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Just some thoughts which came to my mind

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Why can't I see
Whats wrong with me?
But everyone else seems to know
What I can't show.
That’s weird Why should they know whats going on?
Why should they know whats right and whats wrong?
I guess all of us got a different point view.
When we see one anothers´ it creates our own reality new.
Your paradise might be my hell.
So what I'm going through you can't tell!
I know you've got good intentions.
I know you can feel my tensions.
I know you think I just want attention.
Don't give me your hand
If you can't give me a ground to stand
Don't give me your hand if you already know
That when things become heavy you'll let go…
Cause that makes everything worse
Yeah, it makes me scream and curse…
It hurts more than I'd like to admit.
It hurts so bad ,  you´ll feel like s**t
I'm not accusing you
Even though it may sound like it; I don't want to be using you.
Just don't say you'll help if you're not able to
Don't say you'll help if you're not mentally stable too.
It´s not healthy when one helps others
While he personally suffers…
So whats the moral of this piece?
It´s up to you but I hope it gives you peace.

© 2018 Light


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"Your paradise might be my hell" It's so true because we all are different, you penned that very well. Nice writing!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Light

6 Years Ago

!!! Really glad that you enjoy my writings!
another very poignant write my friend the flow of emotions is very clear for everyone to see and read

Posted 6 Years Ago


Light

6 Years Ago

Thanks for all the support from you!

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Added on June 18, 2018
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Tags: Dark, Life, poem, poetry, story

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