Voices

The Demons haunting you...

Voices:

 

1: „ Am I dead?“

2: „Or are you just sad?“

1: “Is my life bad?”

2: “Or is it your mindset?”

1: “Am I really hurt

      By every word?”

2: “Or did you just cry oceans

      Cause you can´t control your emotions?”

Me: “Stop that!

       Get out of my head!

       I don´t care if I´m dead or sad

       I just want some peace instead…”

1&2: “We´ll never leave

           As long as you believe!

Me:  “Well I don’t believe!”

1&2: “Now you´re just lying”

1: “ We see you crying  - alone”

2: “We see you dying �" inside

1:” We see the feelings you hide…”

1&2:” We´ll stay

         We´ll stay

         And you can´t run away”

Me:  “Can´t believe

         Can´t believe

         Can´t believe what you say”

1&2&Me : “Everthings okay!”

 

1(whispers): “as long as we stay…”

2(whispers): “as long as we stay…”

 

 

   

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

another part of the project I´m working on...

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I really liked it..Its really nice and something really different...I love the way you talked with your inner voices and some of your lines were just too beautiful..I am not overrating you rather i am saying what is true..You have great potential as a writer..Keep on improving yourself by each writing that you write and as i said in my earlier review , try to control your emotions..Take one step..You know often the thing that is too difficult is taking the first step and try to do it..I hope that you will at least give it a try..
Keep on writing Meir..
Riddhi..

[Light]

Really glad that you like my writings...
I´m really trying to control my emotions but when I write my emotions take the upper hand... every piece I write is a pure expression of my feelings... But I try to control it!...

~Mier

[sette]

this is actually happening in each of us, there are strange voices that we hear from time to time and you have written it beautifully

[Light]

Well thanks a lot, glad to hear that I´m not the only one ^^