A Remedy for a Broken Heart

A Remedy for a Broken Heart

Yesterday there was just you and me/

Don´t know why but now nothing´s like it used to be…

You said you need some time/

I said that it´s fine

You once said I´d be a mess without you, guess you were right/

Because since you´re gone I can´t sleep at night

I can´t listen to music/

It is making me sick

Every song WE once listened to breaks my heart cause I have to think about you/

But what about you? Are you suffering too? Tell me what do you go through? ...

Are you feeling pain seeing places we used to visit? /

What about our late night conversations, do you miss it?

I´m still making coffee for two/

Just how I used to…

I´m still writing for you/

Just how I used to…

I know I said take your time, I´ll be waiting for you, but I can´t take this no more…/

You seem to be done with us… So I don´t know what I´m waiting for…

But why did you say that there is still a chance? Now I can´t give up till I know it for sure/

Until then I´m staying up all day and all night `n keep looking for a cure

A remedy for my broken heart/

And While searching I fall apart…

 

Author's Note

Might be a bit messy... was made in the middle of the night...

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I´m still making coffee for two/
Just how I used to…
I´m still writing for you/
Just how I used to…"

This was a great piece of art. It made me feel what the writer was feeling and I could really relate to it.
The flow of the poem was great... I feel like this would be a great song!
It made me think and ponder... It was fantastic!
Thank you for your excellent poetry!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Light]

Makes me really happy that you liked it!
a song?... mhh interesting thought...

thanks for your review

your friend,
Light

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Yeah a song would be great! And you're welcome!

[wordman]

i wonder how many people can relate

[Light]

good question...

[April Blue]

I know this feeling all too well, I am sorry that you had or have to go through those emotions... Beautifully written...

[Light]

That´s life...

glad to hear that, thanks alot!

[sette]

so emotional my friend, it brought back painful memories but still as i read your poem it makes me continue to look for the best remedy for a broken heart. thanks for the piece

[Light]

Thank You!!!

[sette]

you are welcome