Spring

My personal Spring experience...

Spring

Grey sky, dark night/

Even though spring is coming, I still see no light

In this bright and colorful season/

My hear feels cold ´n empty and I don’t know the reason

It feels like I´ve lost control/

About my life and about my soul

Now I hear no bird singing/

And no bell ringing

Everything has become silent/

It has just begun but when will it end?

Author's Note

the sequel to my Winter experience...

Any kind of feedback is appreciated

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Now I hear no bird singing/
And no bell ringing
Everything has become silent/
It has just begun but when will it end?

This one was very creative and it made me think about the light of spring and how at times, we have this darkness over our hearts that make it impossible to see the light. I love your work! You have real talent and a skill that will bless and change the lives of many others.
Keep up the great work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[ohmygiggles]

I loved your word choice and rhythm. Nicely done!

[Light]

thanks alot!