i don't know yet!

more lyricism - just a work in progress.

and you walked in through the door
in a manner inconsistent with anything i'd ever seen before
whether you gave off an air of self-confidence or it was something more
i'm not quite sure
but all i know is when you're close, darling when you're near
your voice is the only thing my ears ever seem to hear
as if they're searching for some momentary lapse in whatever exactly it is that we're talking about
but nothing can be found

and sweetheart i could travel the world and the seven seas
regardless i know wherever i go i can still feel your love surrounding me
if it's the way our eyes lock or the way our hands meet
you're the only relief for my calloused and war-torn feet

Author's Note

I'd really love some help on this - I know I can't provide the music, but if anyone would like to add to it poetically, that'd be great. Any input would be appreciated.

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

Since it's for music only, I approve of it entirely. Generally lyrics are the Sparknotes of poetry - they aren't quite as complicated and they use their music to tell the story. There are exceptions.
One thing I would like to see is some elaboration on the last line. It's just kind of there, and it leaves me personally wanting to hear more about what happened.

[fdsa]

AHHHH...now I think I have to go hug something.

[THE [ME]GEAN]

:) You make me happy love.

[Erin]

I almost feel a Death Cab vibe since it has some lines longer than others, but if you wanted to split some lines u the balance would be perfect if thats what you're looking for. I love it the way it is also.