Whisper To Me Softly

Whisper To Me Softly

A Poem by Resa

Whisper to me softly,
As the winds guide our sail.
We belong together,
This love shall prevail.

Whisper to me softly,
As our dreams take flight.
They will never break us down,
For this love is so right.

Whisper to me softly,
While fear invades our dreams.
They are gaining on us now.
Picking us apart at the seams.
Did you whisper to me softly,
The night you said goodbye?

Please, whisper to me softly now,
In this dark room where I watched you die.

Whisper to me softly,
It was all just a nightmare.
Kiss me once so gently,
Let me feel your breath behind my ear.
Whisper to me softly,
Tell me you are here.

© 2018 Resa


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Gee
Some places feels a bit forced as if grasping for a word to rhyme with another, as often happens, as I do it myself. Apart from that an enjoyable read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Yes i agree with Jacob,
thanks for this lovely piece of work and entry into my poetry comp
I am not good at reviews not good at English just love to write
Absolutely love the last verse.

Posted 6 Years Ago


not so much a rhyme fan..but you do it naturally and there is a good feel to this piece.
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice write Resa! I loved the flow! I noticed the last ‘hear’ should be ‘here’ but great job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Resa

6 Years Ago

Thank you Tony!
Sometimes I notice things like that in the work of others.
I’m afrai.. read more
Tony

6 Years Ago

I hope I didn’t offend you but I personally would like to know rather than having it stay like tha.. read more

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Added on March 24, 2018
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Resa
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Brentwood , CA



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