The Artist Dream
Picture a painting,
A portrait of love, honesty and trust.
A scene without, hatred, lies
Or lust.
As real as may seem,
It’s only but,an artists
Dream.
A perspective from the age it was written. What you want against what is real. Nice piece
Thought the 'Gambler was good also, an analogy on love, life etc.
Not sure about 'Jackob'. I understand the feelings involved, but it is a little bit too sentimental for me. Doesn't make it good or bad, just not to my taste. (If we all liked the same thing, the world would be boring.)
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Hi there!
its odd you mentioned the poem about my son, Jakob.
for some reason, i find .. read moreHi there!
its odd you mentioned the poem about my son, Jakob.
for some reason, i find it difficult to write about two people , I love and adore most in the world!
it always ends up coming off as " Textbook Sentimental".
Thank you for reading my work, and your comments,
Resa.
thanks for entering this lovely poem quite deep by the way into my what i dream competiton.its lovely, but as I say deep not sure i understand it, maybe enlighten me after the competition. But i enjoyed, thanks again!
A perspective from the age it was written. What you want against what is real. Nice piece
Thought the 'Gambler was good also, an analogy on love, life etc.
Not sure about 'Jackob'. I understand the feelings involved, but it is a little bit too sentimental for me. Doesn't make it good or bad, just not to my taste. (If we all liked the same thing, the world would be boring.)
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Hi there!
its odd you mentioned the poem about my son, Jakob.
for some reason, i find .. read moreHi there!
its odd you mentioned the poem about my son, Jakob.
for some reason, i find it difficult to write about two people , I love and adore most in the world!
it always ends up coming off as " Textbook Sentimental".
Thank you for reading my work, and your comments,
Resa.