Please don't give in, It's not over.

Inspired by when people feel like giving in, on what, Life? I wrote this to the few or many that feel this way...

Your giving in with every tear you cry,

The pain is overwhelming, trust me, I know,

But why will you let him, them, everyone win?

Please don't give in.

Your heart is currently in a flux of rejection,

Or just confused from the overdose of attention,

Not use to getting the cold shoulder,

I learnt today, that it's not over.

With every night you'll cry silently,

Don't want no-one to hear, 

Soon you'll be asleep,

Returning to your dreams.

They say that to die is easy, peaceful

But to live is hard and pain will come,

But why let them have the final word,

Stand up and tell them your worth.

Because let me tell you a secret,

Your alive, breathing

Have you felt like believing,

That maybe once you'll be alright.

So don't cower down like a young pup,

Your better then that,

Before the levies break,

Stand up tall and suck it up.

Author's Note

I think I kinda lost the emotion at the end =/ sowy

Reviews

[Carolina Kel]

I like it, especially this: "With every night you'll cry silently...returning to your dreams" That's a great thought, kinda like there is always a new day and that this is not the end. Dreams don't die.
I thought this was inspirational. Good job.