Intro: We Three Friends...

The opening of my new story. It introduces you to the three main characters Kame, Yuki and Yoki. Then brings you to the start of an everyday fight.

"Hay Yoki!" Yuki shouts,

Giggling like she always does,

She indicates her hand frantically,

Wanting him to follow and as he catches up,

She casts a finger over a a beautiful sight.

He smiles down at her and she does the same,

I catch up trying to mimic the other two,

But no-one notices me,

I'm just Kame,

A friend pushed to the back.

But we're a team,

Even though we have a job,

We're friends first,

But we're marked from birth,

We free tainted souls, give them peace

I look over at Yuki and Yoki,

Yuki stood small,

A smile on her face,

Cute and all,

With a twinkle in her eye.

She's the gifted one,

Given wings by the angels,

Pretty ones too,

She is known by everyone,

As the Gifted Angel.

Yoki on the other hand,

Is tall, tanned skin and amazing brown eyes,

hair spiked up, tainted a caramel colour

He's handsome too,

Known by many as the Menus.

He knows sword styles that has been forgotten years ago,

Fights like a warrior that is well feared and known,

Always stands tall to abuse his height,

Intimidating anyone who gets close,

Even though I'm Yuki's guardian, he acts like her guard.

Sweeping my eyes back over the scene,

Buildings covered in green,

Foliage everywhere,

towering taller in a fight,

They are encouraged by the light.

But something else caught my eye,

It jumped from sky scraper to another,

Then stopped and looked over,

We locked eyes,

"Over there" I point "A Tainted Soul..."

Reviews

[world gone mad]

your welcome and I'll be the first to say u should continue! its not boring at all and i want to read more lolz

[Midnight_Mask]

I have like the last two, coming up to the ending. thats how I got the idea of it and started from the beginning. But I just need to write the rest. I stopped coz I thought, even though it was a creative idea to have a story formed a group of poems, that people will get bored of it just wont catch on.
I might continue if people think I should but I'm not sure and if I do finish it and people like the characters n story line, I might make it into a story.
Thx for the review World Gone Mad. =]

[world gone mad]

i've read all of them and they r good! i love it and cant wait to read more