live for me, live for me(cont.)

Cold sweat runs down my face,

burning my flesh like wave upon scalding wave.

I struggle to move,

bound my own demons.

Mychains glow red with passion,

my hatred skyrockets.

The darkness seeps into my soul overcoming me.

But wait,

a light.

I feel not a flame as the fire retreats,

but feel my heart beat as you get closer to me.

Faster & faster the blood doth run,

but not on my skin.

You touch the metal,

it disapates into the air & i am free.

I fall to the floor ever so weak,

but you lift me with your heart.

I feel you radiate.

But i do not know your name,

please tell me.

I must know the name of my love.

I want to live for you, living for me.

Reviews

[Dark Lotus Ninja]

thank you

[Tai-San]

Awww. i like this. ur writing is awersome.

[Exa Lectric]

this is amazing! It flows really well. and i think i might have actually cried...

[BriAnna Wyble]

great write!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

excellent , i love this " I must know the name of my love....I want to live for you, living for me"