12:23

12:23

 

 

            One of those nights I guess. Still missing, still regretting, still hating. I’ve thrown away the greatest thing that has ever happened to me, and without, I am nothing but lost. Everything is becoming more and more meaningless, what’s it all for, why do any of us persist with this unbearable grief. To go back? Well a dream of course… but alas, not to ever be. Why listen, why follow, and why agree? One day… one day will be the escape, I tell myself, allowing myself to continue on with this pain. Needing release, freedom… her… of course, how predictable. The time has come to act. Live this curse of  life to your own pleasure, DO as your heart tells you to, nobody wants to ever feel the wounds of regret, so say yes…live a unique and marvelous life. To look back on with a dying breath and smile, proud of what YOU’VE made for a life.

Reviews

[Eve]

Very well done. I think that nearly every teenager can strongly relate to this piece. The pain of losing someone you love or going through a breakup is an indescribably unique pain. I still often lay awake at night regretting throwing away what I once had. On the bright side, I guess that these sad truths make for beautiful writing. :)

[Bod Owens]

Wow, thank you so much. I was hoping that other teenagers could read this and relate to it. :)