Adjusting the frame of the future

Spontaneous write.

Leave the conflictions and fear behind

for some midnight wind.

Let the dust settle and deposit 

to the wall of the past.

The picture was never good anyway.

We'll acknowledge the empty space

and wipe the edges of our life clean

of sadness and discouragement

considering a whole new beginning

with a new layer of direction

and happiness--for a change.

Author's Note

I wrote without much thought or revision. If it sucks I won't do that way again.

Reviews

[Papaya]

This is very positive. Change is a good thing usually. Can't progress without change.
Wipe it all clean and start over in a new direction. The last three word are strung in perfect order, particularly with the break for pause. Creates something moving...

[Alka]

Like this little note on moving on....so simply put