Smile...please?

Smile...please?

A Poem by Bailee Raven
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okay since apple is a little to hard to understand, heres another one for my best friend Audrey. Its what i feel and why you should never doubt why i do things or things i say or ever think i dont care! Smile and be happy, please!!!!

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Dont worry,

be happy,

smile,

enjoy life,

and be happy.

you here me say that many times,

only because,

i care for you,

please,

be happy.

Smile.

Let me worry,

let me panic,

please,

just smile

and be happy

 

A pretty face is meant to smile,

not to frown,

when a red strawberry tell you yo stop freezing your foot,

you should listen,

and smile,

and laugh,

and show the world your beutiful smile.

Because,

nobody likes to see you cry,

unless,

its tears of joy.

Which i wish i could see everyday,

just smile,

my dear best friend...

let me frown and cry for you,

Please?

© 2009 Bailee Raven


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oh its kinda an inside joke THE STRAWBERRY THIng. SEE ONE DAY AT Apples i turned all red randomly so she called me a strawberry. it was weird....

Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm not dumb i got the Apple one just like the ending was werid XD and the STRAWBERRY TELLS NO LIES (GIGGLES) XDXDXDXD LOVE YOU! BFF....

Posted 15 Years Ago


Simple if not a little lead. But well written all teh same, a gentle pleeding with an unhappy sole that gets your point across wtihout a large amount of detail.
I dont quit understand the strawberry line tho, but im sure you had your reasons behind it

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on June 28, 2009

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Bailee Raven
Bailee Raven

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My freinds say im funny. which is true. I am horrible at short or long storys but im okay with poems... I am thirteen and i am an animal lover. I wish i was a vegetearian but i cant be one because its.. more..

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