Cheerleader

Cheerleader

A Poem by Bailee Raven
"

hehehe...i was bored and i kinda of thought about me being a ccheerleader and well, this is howd i proabally act.

"

As the cheerleader cheers,

with the smile on her face,

with tons of cover-up on,

the mini skirts shes forced to wear,

She cant hide the fact,

shes not happy.

 

As the cheerleader is kicked off the team,

she walks down the halls with a frown on her face,

cover up washed off,

mini skirt is now jeans,

she cant hide the fact,

Shes happy.

© 2009 Bailee Raven


Author's Note

Bailee Raven
No,ignore spellign and please be nice! i know im not the good of a writer, (ive heard everyday) so a little critism!

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I like it. The story it tell is an interesting one and begs the question "are we what we do?".
I think you have great potential as a writer.
The only thing you should fix is making the Capitalization consistent.
Other than that, it's just fine. Keep up the good work. *smile*

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bailee Raven
Bailee Raven

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My freinds say im funny. which is true. I am horrible at short or long storys but im okay with poems... I am thirteen and i am an animal lover. I wish i was a vegetearian but i cant be one because its.. more..

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