Mushroom Soup

Two hands, one arm
Together we work
In the dark among the sands.

Wheeling around
Hoping to find
Something profound
Among the ropes of time.

Climbing, climbing
Nothing ever rhyming
The cling cling
Of the rhythm stick.

Reviews

[Romeion Case]

:-) nice and simple. the writer's conundrum.

[EMW]

Very interesting. I expected this to be about mushroom soup. lol.

[Coyote Poetry]

I write when my mind is rested. I have been working too hard. I like when I have time to create and make the mind work with words and story. I like the flow and the ending. Nothing as pleasure as to create a good poem or story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[seeeker78]

climbing climbing, nothing ever rhyming
excellent my friend, I love this one :)

[The Water Queen]

this was an interesting read and afgter the movie i watched tonight nothing surprises me. I liked the flow and the rythm. Great poem.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

exotic serving of literary fare~ imaginative and fun with a sharp clear edge!~

[Michael X]

absolutely awsome, the ending, is amazing, rhytm stick music,
poetry is mushroom soup. loved it, keep it up

[Kasey Jones]

Interesting imagery and great rhythm. Good job.