Eyes Can be Opened

Thinking for yourself...

Not Turning your back... 

Accepting the inevitable...

All things eventually come to an end...

Every living thing will one day disappear...

Only by accepting this can we discover what we truly want...

What the meaning of their lives will really be...

Reviews

[Patrick]

this is astounding. I love what you have penned here. It is beautiful and so unique. I am impressed how you put this topic to such profound words.

[Gabby Nieves]

Not disappear but be reinvented, all energy must be returned. We do not own energy, it's only borrowed. I like the concept here, though. In such a short poem you said so much, of course we've got to accept our fate, well we don't have a choice, do we? lol it's so fun to think of death to me, because it's so exciting like you can't control it so may as well embrace it. Only mistake I see here is *Lives or *Life it should be, not too sure. But their live idk lol doesn't seem right. Anyways, you're f*****g cool as always and I always love your mind. It's like a forest in that b***h

[Orlando Wynn]

Yeah that was a typo lmao you know how I post these things in the early hours of the morning. And I'm fascinated with death too. I think, we only are what we think we are.. quite different to what others think we are. I also love talking about these things with you. I could spend hours picking your brain talking about aboutan endless multitude of subjects

[Destined for Boring]

As heads rise above water gasping for air. Feeling the breeze across their face! How refreshing!

[Orlando Wynn]

I could feel your words as I read over them, I'm glad you enjoyed this breath of fresh air.

[A. Amos]

This is deep and profound...you are talented and wise my friend!

[Orlando Wynn]

Thank you :) I'm glad you found this deep and profound. I hope my talent can touch people's hearts

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend...