World of Dreams

Just a little bit longer

Just a few feet farther

Just a couple more mountains to climb

Valleys to cross

And Clouds to jump over 

Till I land in in this new place

Beyond the rainbow's end

Across the river bend

Up in the sky

Where I can get lost

In the madness and wonder

Dancing in starlight 

Bathing in summer

Finally free from the Cage

Of this Earth, The chains

Of reality

Oh woe, yes woe to thee

Whose eyes are so blind

They cannot see

All the magic hiding

Just under the surface 

Of science and reason

Speaking in rhymes

And clothed in the seasons

Oh what whimsy I shall find

In that place I hope to call mine

I shall not stop searching

For this place of Fairy Tales

And wishes and dreams

Ah what beauty there shall be

Nightmares will forever fade

Once I find this wonderful place

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

mickey i reviewed this already! its awesome friend!

[kublakhan27]

A fascinating journey you take the reader on here...I relate to this piece very much...well done :)

[Tai Ryens]

A world so alluring it lingers behind the reality of the mind, despite various claims of inexistence from science and reason gives this a mysterious aura, and I love it. Whether this world is imagination, or in some part in Canada, I'd love to be here.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) if I'm ever up in Canada and find it I'll let ya know ;P

[Isabelle Howard]

NEW FAVORITE POEM on this site!
I love this! It has sort of a magical aura around it. Captivating. Amazing.
I really do love this.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much!!
God bless:)

[Isabelle Howard]

:)

[Amaya Sullivan]

I love this! Full of such emotion and wonder. I've read this at least 10 times already while trying to post this review. I don't know much about poetry, but I really love the words in the last four lines. This poem is so pretty!

[Lost in Wonderland]

aw thanks Amaya!!
God bless

[K. D. Kromminga]

Its nice to see positive emotion and thoughts crafted into poetry. Of positive emotions, hope is probably one of the hardest to define. So few poets can pull off uplifting for some reason, but you did it in an interesting way without having to fall on the traditional crutches of philosophical or ideological iconography. You make the reader want to share in your pleasant and whimsical dream from beginning to end, well done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) God bless

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice piece Mickey, whimsical and dream like.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks John! God Bless:)

[Lonely Islander]

Been searching for that place ever since i understood what reality is n one day i will find it. God will lead me to it. A beautiful poem this was. Sweet n inspirational:-):-):-D.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:) God bless

[T.C. Banks]

This poem reminds me of a song called Long Way Home by Steven Curtis Chapman.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l1p-QfgkLow

[Moniba]

Wow! I love the idea, I love the subtle rhymes, I love the way you've expressed this!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)
God Bless