World of Dreams

Just a little bit longer

Just a few feet farther

Just a couple more mountains to climb

Valleys to cross

And Clouds to jump over 

Till I land in in this new place

Beyond the rainbow's end

Across the river bend

Up in the sky

Where I can get lost

In the madness and wonder

Dancing in starlight 

Bathing in summer

Finally free from the Cage

Of this Earth, The chains

Of reality

Oh woe, yes woe to thee

Whose eyes are so blind

They cannot see

All the magic hiding

Just under the surface 

Of science and reason

Speaking in rhymes

And clothed in the seasons

Oh what whimsy I shall find

In that place I hope to call mine

I shall not stop searching

For this place of Fairy Tales

And wishes and dreams

Ah what beauty there shall be

Nightmares will forever fade

Once I find this wonderful place

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

oooooh mickey i looooooove it! if i could i give you like a billion points! beautiful

[J. F. Charleston]

AMAZING!!! TOTALLY AMAZING!!! BRAVO!!! Wow, that was mind blowing! I think that's better than Shakespear! The hope and search for a place that's perfect. When I read this, I thought you were talking about Heaven. Oh, man that was brilliant! Absolutely going to shelve this in my favorites!

1,000,000,000/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

aww thank you so much!!!! That just made my day :D
God Bless!

[J. F. Charleston]

You're welcome. I was blown away with this. And the same to you too.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:) Thanks again! Is there anything I can review in return?

[J. F. Charleston]

Well there's a bit I think you haven't, but by all means review what you want. And thanks.