World of Dreams

Just a little bit longer

Just a few feet farther

Just a couple more mountains to climb

Valleys to cross

And Clouds to jump over 

Till I land in in this new place

Beyond the rainbow's end

Across the river bend

Up in the sky

Where I can get lost

In the madness and wonder

Dancing in starlight 

Bathing in summer

Finally free from the Cage

Of this Earth, The chains

Of reality

Oh woe, yes woe to thee

Whose eyes are so blind

They cannot see

All the magic hiding

Just under the surface 

Of science and reason

Speaking in rhymes

And clothed in the seasons

Oh what whimsy I shall find

In that place I hope to call mine

I shall not stop searching

For this place of Fairy Tales

And wishes and dreams

Ah what beauty there shall be

Nightmares will forever fade

Once I find this wonderful place

Reviews

[rohit sapra]

In reality everyone wishes for such a world however when dreams get mixed with reality then they sadly shatter. Although, it is nice to dream as it makes life less painful to live in.

[C.A. Lucas]

Wow, so amazing. Not only did this one dig down deep into what I really want, but it was a very enjoyable read. This is probably one of your best writings.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)) God bless!

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I wish I could go there! I loved the part of:
Finally free from the Cage
Of this Earth, The chains
Of reality

Reality in my case isn't the best...
100/100 Amazing poetry! Always looking forward for more!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you! God bless

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ur welcome! ^.^

[The Invisible Girl]

A marvelous poem! :D 100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!

[TheJordBaker]

enchanting, I had to keep reading!! well done :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Jord:)
God bless

[InsanityWriter]

Fantastical. ;)

[AWickedMoon]

Great imagry and flow! Loved it. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)

[Kupendwa]

This is beautiful! I love it so so so much. It flows perfectly, it's wonderfully written. But it's not just a greatly written poem, it's more than that. It's magical. Good job (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much!!! c:
God bless

[Kupendwa]

You're welcome! (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Rachel Anderson]

Sounds like a description of Wonderland. It's great! :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)

[Invisible]

sounds almost like a collaberation piece between pocahontas the little mermaid and alice from those disney films, (not in an offensive way). i simply mean it has a childlike charm to it, but with a twistedness that tim burton wishes he could produce (he sucks).