Girl in the Mirror

There's girl in my mirror

I watch her at times

With her hair, dark waves

And the purest blue eyes

She stays in her room

In her own little world

Locked away by a curse

My lovely, sad eyed girl

Her song is like an angel

Soulful and true

Its the only joy she has

For what else can she do?

At times I'll get close

Placing my hand on the glass

Cursing our divider

Assuring her curse will last

But one day she looked up

And I think she saw me to

So just in case I was all she had

I whispered "I love you"

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Wow...this was cute :) It's nice the you whispered "I love you", so then she wouldn't feel so alone. It was a wonderful story and I loved the imagery in it. Curses are deadly and leave us trapped by ourselves, for only certain people can break them. It's sad, but a true enough story and hopefully someone is able to break her curse soon enough and free her from her room.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks! Glad you liked my little story:)
God bless

[Rachel Anderson]

This is such a real poem. Very otherworldly while still being down to earth. Love it.

[SeekingMeaning]

This is LOVELY. Thank you for sharing it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) God bless

[C.A. Lucas]

Nice, this is awesome. I would whisper that, too. Sounds just like me, "So just in case I was all she had, I whispered 'I love you'" I love this poem. But I think you mean "There's a girl in my mirror" and in the last stanza, "And I think she saw me too" Great poem! 100/100

[B. Tatum]

Very good! I could read it over and over again....

[Lost in Wonderland]

Why thank you very much c:
God bless

[Holly Mason]

very lovely poor little blue eyed girl
flows quite nicely title got me to read it
thank you for sharing

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)
God bless

[Miranda Richard]

"She looked up and saw me to," is wrong. "Too," is used as 'in addition, or 'also.' Otherwise, a very lovely poem. Great job :)

[An owl on the moon]

So hauntingly beautiful... the aching... the angst... bound so often in pain and fear.. reflections reveal so much about the universe inside us our minds... hated or loved... blessed or cursed... Your words are powerfully profound.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) I truly appreciate it:) I'm considering turning this into a short story

[An owl on the moon]

Yes, please... Your words enchanted the silver reflection. (I hope your week ahead is deep blessed.)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) and likewise!

[Acer]

Nicely written. loved it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:)

[Acer]

My pleasure.Your second phrase i did love much
She stays in her room
In her own little world
Locked away by a curse
My lovely, sad eyed girl.
very nice stanza.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)

[Acer]

you're welcome :-')

[J. F. Charleston]

Sad but also very delightful. I really liked this one. Haven't read anything like this before, so it was very interesting.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) God Bless