Is this Enough?

Forgive me my prince

Will I ever be enough

Can I make you smile?

Reviews

[J. F. Charleston]

I wish my crush said that to me. I'd say heck yeah! It is very short, but very emotional.

[Kyle Sky]

Short and so beautiful. Each phrase is enough for me to smile. Great piece

[Lonely Islander]

There is such a pleading, yearning, hopeful and some unknown emotion in these three simple lines. Its amazing. Just simply amazing!:-):-):-D.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God bless

[Sevendayspast]

I know exactly how you feel Chica, that is if this coming from a religious standing. :) short and sweet ^.^

-chuck.

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh hm, thats not how I saw it but thanks for the other interp ^.^

[Sevendayspast]

Lol well I still feel yeah. But for more of a princess hahaha :p

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha of course:P

[Seanh12]

cool i like this it is easy to follow, I am shall the prince will forgive you but he is your prince he will be there for you.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:)

[Seanh12]

your welcome anytime. It was very good.

[Clockwork]

Yes, Rain makes a good point. If he is indeed a prince, he will be benevolent and wipe away the tears of his lady. Then she will smile. Love and smiles are a two way street, my lady. Rest your weary heart; all in good time.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks for saying so:)
God bless

[Clockwork]

And may He smile upon you as well :-)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)

[falling_toxic_rain]

I feel as if your prince will forgive you, because he is your prince, AP therefore he shall smile as well...
Cheer up. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:)
God bless

[falling_toxic_rain]

Youre welcome, and you too.