When You're not here

When You're not here

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

Baby can I tell you a secret?
On that makes me blush and hide my face
Because I'm sorta scared to tell you
For fear you'll laugh and walk away
Well here goes nothing
I'm so tired of being strong
I miss you baby
Every hour that you're gone
I miss the words you whisper
Lips lingering at my ear
I crave the warmth of your strong arms
Drawing me ever near
I Miss the way you call me baby
Angel, divine and love
Murmuring adoration into sweet kisses
And I could never get enough
Whenever we don't talk
This distance seems farther
Pulling my heart wherever you are
Making this smile a little harder
Because my love, my prince
My protector, my friend
I need you more then you know
So please come back and take my hand

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
eh I don't know if it was worth publishing

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Has a lot of feel to it I think you did well with this. I can't say anything more since I know absolutely nothing of love and if I just scanned this I would say its cheesy and so common for someone to say that. But I came to like this piece after a bit.

Also please do read/review my stuff :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I think this is well written, and so amazing, romantic, and beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Zachary(:
God bless
Zachary_James

11 Years Ago

Anytime hang in there i am sure it will get better.
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thanks(: it is getting better
Very romantic, and so very innocent. It reminds me of days in my life of early love, it was so very intense, but mostly heartbreaking.......It truly was a learning experience.......good read Thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the review(:
God bless!
I like this; its simple, sweet, and sincere. It can relate to both those who are in love and have lost a love.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

thank you very much
God bless
i love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww this is sweet, so romantic! You should send him this poem! I'm lucky...I don't have to miss my baby. He lives in my neighborhood! Oh, but I wish you could be so lucky. Well, have a happy holidays anyway girl! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

yeah haha it sorta sucks but I still love him(: Merry Christmas!
SmileBig :)

11 Years Ago

Oh I'm sure it does, but love can go far :) merry Christmas to you too, friend!
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thanks missy(((:
romantic, deeply personal, but one anyone who has ever been in love can relate too.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
It is a lovely piece. It reminds me that my lady and I are apart this holiday which is sad but alas is life.

Posted 11 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

No I am calm as I know I have true love in my life at last and a few days apoart won't change it!
Lost in Wonderland

11 Years Ago

That's good(:
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

It is and I wish everyone could feel this.

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