Until Then Love..

Here I sit

Alone in the dark

Squeezing my eyes

And clutching my heart

Trying to remember

With all my might

What your lovely,

Musical voice sounds like

I hug my stomach

And choke back tears

Against the familiar ache

Of all the lonely years

Feel my broken heart beat

And try to do what you told me

All the horrid moments

When I felt so weak

"Remember baby

I'm always here

When you need me

To kiss away fears

Feel your heart

I'll hold it tight

Cradeling you close

In the darkest nights

Don't you cry

My angel, my queen

I'll take you away

You'll be safe with me"

I'll treasure those words

I'll try to be brave

Till I see you again

And you sweep me away

Until that moment

Here I will stay

Dreaming endlessly

Of our reunion day

Reviews

[Sevendayspast]

Well I was going to say how I felt about this lol but after reading over previous comments everything already be said :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha ok:P thanks for the comment ^.^

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing makes time crawl like waiting for love to return. a beautifully melancholy write.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much
God bless

[KeeD]

This is so heartfelt, the honesty and love it portrays is just so beautiful. This is how love should always be portrayed as a longing, unquenchable thirst trying to be filled by the "significant other". Great write.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks Keegan:)
God bless

[Andorianskye]

Breathtaking

[Drowning with Stars]

This gave me chills, no joke. The first stanza is totally sensual. Love it :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks gorgeous:)

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Really liked it a lot. A little sad but hey sometimes you need to read something like this. I can relate to this all the way.

-Matthew Hardy-

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Matthew:)
God bless

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

God bless you too :)))

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Zachary_James]

Oh how beautiful, my favorite line were:
" Here I sit, alone in the dark,
squeezing my eyes and clutching my heart.
Trying to remember with all my might,
what your lovely voice sounds like."
I love the whole message, i love everything
about this poem

- Zachary

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks so much Zachary! :)
God bless

[Zachary_James]

God bless you too, and one question? Do you design book covers?

[Lost in Wonderland]

what do you mean?

[Zachary_James]

like do you make book covers for example Scared, did you make that using photoshop?

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh no I dont, I get all my images from google/bing images accept for "She STands with her HEad held High" and "Bridge"

[Zachary_James]

ohh my bad, sorry about that.

[Lost in Wonderland]

its all good:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

this poem reminds me of the song "you'll be safe here" by rivermaya
you can check on it
=]
nice write