Simply Alice ~A Song~

Cry me a river I’ll swim in the sadness Growing accustomed To this beautiful madness Dark puppet strings Make us dance to the music That the lost souls sing   Fight for the light It is growing so dim If I should run Will I make back out again Or will he drag me back down To the bottom of the world with him?   Oh oh oh I’m starting to drown The rains coming down Is this the end? No no no I will not I can not No I won't let him win   Chorus: Cause this time is different I’m flying so high Braking these chains And dancing in the sunshine Baby you better believe I’m finding this light   Spinning around Happy again Laughing with people Like we’re old friends I’ll be smiling so bright As soon as I find this light**   Enter the darkness It seems we all fall Hoping for peace In the thick of it all And I’ll still be looking Till clock’s song ends   You think your so charming Got me under your spell And while I’ll admit At one point I fell These things that you do to me Make me want to scream I’m done!   Oh oh oh I’m starting to drown The rains coming down Is this the end? No no no I will not I can not No I won't let him win   Chorus: Cause this time is different I’m flying so high Braking these chains And dancing in the sunshine Baby you better believe I’m finding this light   Spinning around Happy again Laughing with people Like we’re old friends I’ll be smiling so bright As soon as I find this light**   Bridge: So try all you want Get down on your knees Say that you’ll change You're not fooling me You king of this palace And I’m simply Alice Trying to go Find her way home   Chorus: (softly) And this time is different I’m flying so high Braking these chains And dancing in the sunshine Baby you better believe I’m finding this light   Spinning around Happy again Laughing with people Like we’re old friends I’ll be smiling so bright As soon as I find this light**

Author's Note

Thank you so much to Forgotten and Jeff for helping me with this!!! :DD
God had the glory and may he bless you!
Love always
~Lost in Wonderland

Here's the link to the song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AFtVv5RVgSo
(my voice is tired don't judge:P)

Reviews

[Tomi]

simply alice is simly beautiful

[Lost in Wonderland]

sorry for the later reply! but thank you!
God bless

[Tai Ryens]

Falling to the woeful tune of a lonely warlock; or at least that is how I perceived it. To be forever beneath a witch's trance! How melancholic!

[Castonovia]

Lyrical indeed with such deeply woven notes now etched in a tapestry piece of my soul. At first depressing, but then a true inspiration full of light... loved how you vividly compared yourself to Alice, sounds like endurance, trying to survive to find your way in a world. Simply awesomeness intensified well penned indeed and can't wait to read more of your work!!! ;)

[Lost in Wonderland]

eep sorry for the later reply!! But thank you so much:D
God bless

[Castonovia]

Haha, no problem sorry for mine as well :P

[Pax]

My friend, my Friend... you have out done yourself...
the song itself and your voice blend a fine tune to your lyrics...
awesome....
Your really awesome.... talented!!!!!!
and about the lyrics i see it spoke of your experienced on heartbreak...
really beautiful crafted...
well done!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much!

[Pax]

i like your voice, i see you've trained hard on it...keep it up my friend...
you'll achieved your dream...and your welcome....

[Erinne S.]

The lyrics were written very well and the flow was perfect in my opinion. My only critique though is in your chorus the word 'braking' should actually be spelled 'breaking' :) Easy fix!
Well done with this fabulous song.

~Erinne

[deepblue04]

that's some amazing lyrics, although it's breaking in the chorus, isn't it?

[CHRIS ANDES]

i like this song
and it reminds me being a frustrated musician
haha
=]

[}Echo{]

This is really awesome. I like this. :)

[Tarry Franck]

You did a great job - love it :)