The First Dance

It's finally happened

My dream's come true

That's all I can think

As you lead me to the floor with you

 

Your hand low on my hips

Lips lingering near my neck

As we start to sway

And the world around us fades

 

You smile at me

Like I'm an angel divine

Making a blush paint my cheeks

I can't believe you mine

 

As the music envelopes us

Erasing all strife

You whisper softly in my ear

"I love you, my wife"

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I think every slow dance should have the late great Mr. Charles behind the piano. Esp, when it is something that runs deep. But as the song say's 'Still peaceful dreams I see, the road leads back to you' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fRgWBN8yt_E

Those are in every mind of a man in love and to whom this is addressed too, i hope they know that but than again, they always do. Lucky fella's

[Patrick Henry]

I like it. It made me nervous!! lol *ssshhhh!* I'm not a good dancer. : ) I can't picture the last line being said aloud. It spawned a "giggle", says this "macho man". lol Great poem!! xoxo -Mark

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha I'm a bad dancer too:P

[Drowning with Stars]

Oh, that's beautiful.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks love!

[devon]

SO CUTE AND SWEET! Oh my gosh! I love the last line, as well. It's so romantic and beautiful.

And in the last line of the third stanza, I think you meant to say, "I can't believe you're mine".

:)

Great write!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!!! I'll fix that haha:)
God bless

[Zachary_James]

How romantic, i love the ending great work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:3
God bless

[Zachary_James]

No problem.I'd be honored to read more of your works, anytime.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[}Echo{]

This is really neat. Great write. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks you:)

[}Echo{]

:)