Kiss me

Take my hand, Love

It's waiting for your's alone

Pull me to your chest

And dance with me

I don't care who's watching

As long as your arms hold me tight

As we spin aimlessly

In the creamy moon light

I can feel your heartbeat

steady and sure

Matching my own

as my eyes slip close 

The rain pours down

In a gentle caress

Adding to this fantasy

Trickling down our necks

I'm caught in a dream

As you whisper you love me

Tracing my waist

With a feathery touch

As my pulse picks up pace

My cheeks grow warm

A thousand butterflies bubble

Fueling my ardor

My hands find your neck

And our gazes meet

I lean in close as I can

And beg you darling please...

"Kiss me."

Author's Note

Written on a whim
God has the glory

Reviews

[beautiful dreamer]

nicely done lol

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)

[beautiful dreamer]

i'm sorry my ADD is acting up and i had the weirdest urge to call you micaragua lol lol lol i'm weird i know

[beautiful dreamer]

thats offically your nickname you've been deemed a jenny nickname you must accept!!!! lol kidding if you dont like it i wont say it lol

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha its fine:) better than my old nick name *shudders* haha

[beautiful dreamer]

which was??

[Lost in Wonderland]

kenna

[beautiful dreamer]

why lol

[Lost in Wonderland]

I just thought it made me sound like a little kid

[beautiful dreamer]

no why was your nickname kenna?

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh cause my names McKenna

[beautiful dreamer]

ohh gotcha, my nick name is iffer so don't feel bad, it gets worse for some lol. or you know every body says jenny the way forest gump says it :( that's why i like jen. just jen. or iffy i don't mind iffy.

[beautiful dreamer]

i babysit a McKenna i call her Kenny just to be different lol

[beautiful dreamer]

or i mix her name with her sisters name calliegh so it ends up kennaleigh or calenna lol

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha cool

[beautiful dreamer]

:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

this is extremely romantic and sweet much loved poem :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[The 13th Eros]

Your poetry creates a fragrance of that first garden when there were only two; no distractions. The fire that must have lit at that very first kiss when passion was born.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you for that beautiful review:)

[Patrick Henry]

Bare ardor in full fervor!! How beautifully intricate and fanciful, this moment, to spend such quality time with you, and perfecting a bond through dance!! Lovers, light on their feet, and the rain heavy upon our brow certainly adds to the mystique that we own the night..... Wonderful, feel-good, sexy, and a great poem to hear and picture one of your most beautiful of sides in writing such a poem. I want to dance with you and toss you up in the air and catch you, and anything ELSE a dance allows for!! Great job!! Beautiful, Mickey.... xoxo -Mark

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you so much! always nice to hear a review from you:D And trust me you wouldn't want to dance with me, haha. I'm an awkward dancer:PP

[Patrick Henry]

Me too!! ....THAT'S what makes it special. For in those moments of innocent candor, we find these moments to be self-evident to humility and love. To you, as a poet, I Love You. I can't visit this site and start to write or enjoy myself without visiting my few favorites first!! My favorite lines.... I read it 4 times in the course of trying to finish it the FIRST time!! lol
"As you whisper you love me
Tracing my waist
With a feathery touch"
.....It turns me into a mush. lol Beautiful words to christen with the freedom of dance, and the prettiest of writes, from such an emotive poetess!! xoxox -Mark

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw well thank you mark! I always live your reviews:)
God bless!

[Lost in Wonderland]

*love

[Patrick Henry]

Back at ya with a scent of a kiss upon the wind that finds a home within your wind-blown hair. Thank YOU!! xoxo -Mark

[Kyle Sky]

This is a piece truly filled with passion in it. I love it.It great flow of words that match the mood.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks Kyle(:

[Pax]

:)
ver sweet and sensual write...
i see the longging for a kiss...
a passion that burns inside out...
great work!
:)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:))