The world in your eyes

Can we just live in this moment

Where the world doesnt exist

Outside of your eyes

when they meet mine

 

And all I feel is your kiss

What a crazy sense of bliss

Thinking, honey

All I want is this

 

And who cares if we don't have forever

Cause right here, right now we're together

With you're hand holdin' mine

Oh it feels divine

So baby don't worry...

We're gonna be just fine

 

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

One or two hiccups, but the work is displayed in the emotion and not the grammar, very fine is I may say so.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Not surprised there are errors, though I adore writing I am not great at editing my own work (shame, huh? Haha) But anyway, thank you for the review! :)

[Falling Leaf.]

Very simply sweet. A few grammar hiccups but other than that, a treat to read.

Best of luck to you,
S

[SmileBig :)]

Stop writing so freaking good! Haha I love this

[Lost in Wonderland]

Nooo haha, this isn't that great! But thank you

[SmileBig :)]

Yes :) haha

[Lost in Wonderland]

No:P

[SmileBig :)]

Stop lying! :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

I ain't lying you sweet girl! :]

[SmileBig :)]

Oh well of course you are my dear friend :) see, it seems to me, that whatever u write is magical and filled with emotion or love. :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw your so nice to say so:)

[SmileBig :)]

I speak the truth :P hehe ur welcome :)