Clouds

Screw the world!

You broke my heart

Beat me down

And tore me apart

Laughing at a fragile girl's pain

Tell me "babe"

Does that make you a real man?

Toying with my emotions

Making me believe you cared

Cared? Cared? You never cared!

Not that I was alone and scared

Just starting to heal

But "oh no", you said

"I'll play a little game with her instead

Haha it'll be funny right?

Won't keep her up at night

Hugging her pillow

And holding back tears

Because after 4 freaking years

She felt a medley of butterflies

And the dark clouds started to leave her skies

Only to reveal that that the sun shine

Was only a horrible hurricane's eye"

I'm sick if being looked at

Like I'm only good for a shoulder to cry on

Then you decide to run out on

Me and all I thought we'd had

What a romantic psychopath!

Call me young and stupid

Call me sensitive and over dramatic

But don't I have a right to cry

When the clouds re-enter my sky?

Author's Note

Read it, do't read it I don't care...just had to get my pent up emotions out there

Reviews

[acidmonkey]

You entered a contest I judged and I'd like to say you made it to the top 3 out of 38 amazing writers, you made it very difficult for me I read this piece 4 times to decide which of the three i should put in which place. I believe you deserve this.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you! :)

[Pax]

feeling better now, hope you let it out every last bit... it reliefs you... you have every right to cry, tears will relieve you and leave a scar but then someone will patch it up to a new beginning...someday...so keep your hopes up for the better...heartbreak is a way for us to learn...

great expressed emotions!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you, I'm feeling much better now:)

[Pax]

that's nice to hear...be well and god bless...

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you, I'll try and be as well as I can..:) God bless you too. Thank you for your kindness friend

[Pax]

you're welcome :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[SmileBig :)]

Oh my gosh this is awesome! Great job...I totally know what you mean! My ex did the same exact thing. He knew I was under a really deep depression and that I was really suicidal but hes like "oh I'll just play around with her for a little bit." and now where am I? Close to dropping out of school, a druggy, and a cutter. Guys SUCK! Stay away from them for a little while

[Lost in Wonderland]

I'm so sorry about that Missy! D: and yeah some of really know how to hurt a girl e.e

[SmileBig :)]

It's cool, I'm realizing guys shouldn't hurt me like that nd im starting to find light again..if only just a little :) and yea, they really do. But some guys r nice. Go for them! And u don't have to date a guy! Just be friends!

[Lost in Wonderland]

yeah:)

[Jordan's Back]

I loved the hardcore drive of emotions, this is a great write and a slap in the face to the person that pissed you off, my favorite lines:
And tore me apart

Laughing at a fragile girl's pain

Tell me "babe"

Does that make you a real man?

Toying with my emotions

Making bme believe you cared

Cared? Cared? You never cared!

Guys can be so f*****g stupid... Great write!

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha thanks, I was really irritated>.< I feel a bit better now haha XP

[Jordan's Back]

Im Glad you feel better, Nice people like you shouldn't have to feel this way

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks c:

[C.C. Marx]

I can totally relate, I'm sick of people toying with my emotions

[Lost in Wonderland]

sorry to hear abot that:/ I'm with ya!