I Dare You

I dare you to make me smile

I dare you to give me butterflies

To hold my hand and never let go

And everyday, make me feel beautiful

 

I dare you to dry my tears

And hold me when my fears

Get overwhelming or just when I need a hug

I dare you to make what we have

More than enough

 

I dare you to hold my hand

And help me pick up the pieces

Of the heart that's been broken by him

 

I dare you to grin at me

And make my cheeks blush pink

As we burst out laughing

At nothing and absolutely everything

 

I dare you to dance with me

Under the midnight stars

In the middle of the street

Content with where we are

 

Promise me this feeling'll never end

'Cause darling...

I dare you to make me fall in love again

 

Author's Note

I'm tired of being afraid of falling in love....I'm ready to let a guy sweep me off my feet. It may not happen soon...but when it does, I just want to get caught up in it:)
God has the glory and may He bless you
Love always
~Mickey

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

"Those who wait and prepare for love usually find love first, those who rush and find for usually are the last."
A quote i shall give to a writer who knows how to truly express her feelings.
May God guide you to your true love

[Pax]

God has his ways of showing my friend...You'll never know what will come...
great poem!

[DrD]

It's difficult when love isn't as we imagined and worse when it evades us like a child's game. Our sanctuary is in words like yours and I appreciate them because I share the feeling they represent. I would like to see a better structure in line patterns but the concept is excellent and more important, I sensed the feeling far more than the thought. Kudos.

[Alyssa Carlstrom]

What you said in your note really impresses me. Anyway, the poem is great. It says what you want in a guy, and one day he will show up when you least expect it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)
God bless

[Invisible]

not sure god'll be the one to send you someone, but what do i know? i'm just a story teller (in honor of varric tethras)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Eh, it's just what I believe(:

[Invisible]

of course, and there's no problem with having your own beliefs, especially when many or in this case, most, agree. to each their own, that's one of my motto's.

[Lost in Wonderland]

That's a good motto:) we're given free will, who are we to judge what others believe in?

[Invisible]

i don't know, but i've met quite a few people, especially those who follow christ, who push their beliefs on others, and see no problem in doing so, claiming that saving ones soul is worth it. personally, i don't see evidence that they're more right than anyone else, with not but a book to guide them, as does every faith and religion. who cares if i don't agree, or simply don't want to get involved? i am not their responsibility, that hardship rests with me and me alone. right?

[Lost in Wonderland]

Well while I think its okay to share your faith, its not my place to dedcide what you believe or to judge harshly. ya know?

[Invisible]

that's the wise attitude i find, though that may sound condescending to some. in any case, you have my approval, whatever that means to you.

[Lost in Wonderland]

I don't mean to sound condescending haha actually I try to be as accepting. But thanks for you approval:)

[Invisible]

m,hmm! lol.

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha