Dancing in the Sand

A romantic fantasy...oh if only <3

Do you think we could run away?

Escape the impossibility of our love

Forget all complications

Throw caution to the wind

And just...go with it?

 

Won't you please swoop into my reality

And take me away to a lovely dream

Where I can feel the warm caress of your hand

As we dance barefoot in the sand

And get butterflies

A bubbly feeling that's aroused inside

When your gentle lips meet mine

And when I get lost in your deep, brown eyes

 

Free falling in a spiral of ardor

Laughing, smiling, playing

Acting like children and true loves

All at once

Apart from our past sins

And in a place of pure bliss

Filled with soft embraces

And topped with a sweet kiss

Author's Note

Written on a whim, as most of my poems and stories are:) God has the glory and may He bless you
Love always
~Lost in Wonderland

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Reminds me of We Could Run Away by Needtobreathe

VERY nice

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you steven:)

[Steven Cash]

np

[Soul Fire]

Wow...Amazing..and beautiful

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you raya:)
God bless

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome. (:

[Emily]

Beautiful. I don't know what else to say.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Jetta Zippora]

This is so beautiful. I enjoyed your fantasy write and the words flow perfectly together. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much friend:)

[TheJordBaker]

really sweet and lushly penned. great write :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you :)
God bless

[That_Girl]

Wonderful fantasy... expressed beautifully. Well done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Somebrownnerd]

Really enjoyed this one one. The imagery was great, and it flowed well with the emotion of the poem. It is definitely an alluring feeling, bliss. Looking forward to more of your writing!

-Z

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:)
God bless

[Redrascalstrawberry]

It's really sweet :) nicely done.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless