Dancing in the Sand

A romantic fantasy...oh if only <3

Do you think we could run away?

Escape the impossibility of our love

Forget all complications

Throw caution to the wind

And just...go with it?

 

Won't you please swoop into my reality

And take me away to a lovely dream

Where I can feel the warm caress of your hand

As we dance barefoot in the sand

And get butterflies

A bubbly feeling that's aroused inside

When your gentle lips meet mine

And when I get lost in your deep, brown eyes

 

Free falling in a spiral of ardor

Laughing, smiling, playing

Acting like children and true loves

All at once

Apart from our past sins

And in a place of pure bliss

Filled with soft embraces

And topped with a sweet kiss

Author's Note

Written on a whim, as most of my poems and stories are:) God has the glory and may He bless you
Love always
~Lost in Wonderland

Reviews

[Kupendwa]

This is so phenomenal. Like really, you've done a splendid job. I love it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

aw thank you!!
God bless

[FrancescaX]

written on a whim...?! seriously the poem is so heart warming. i love it and i wish i could be the girl in the poem. that is ofcourse, if the guy decides to run away with me...preferably me in his arms ;)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:) i'm sure you'll find him:)
God bless

[Kyle Sky]

Bittersweet and simply sweet to read. The words weaved an escape from reality into a beautiful fantasy and the athmsphere is simply admired. I love the emotion in it. Lovely piece.

[Soul Fire]

So amazing and beautiful,had to read again!

[Lost in Wonderland]

aw thank you:')

[Soul Fire]

Added to favs to.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you!! :'D

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome

[Jodie Ng]

I love this poem because I totally understand the emotions that you captured! It's beautifully bittersweet

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw thank you Jodie:)
God Bless

[Tai Ryens]

Ah, the bittersweet pain of love. Imagining the things that could be, but never done courtesy of anxiety. Not sure why, but this struck the pessimistic side of my conscious.

[Lost in Wonderland]

I could see how this could bring up pessimistic feelings..
Thanks for reveiwing

[Pax]

this is the first time i've read a very sweet and lovely poem from you...I like this very much...there is a romantic theme in it..great!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Willyam:)
God bless

[Pax]

*smiles...you still remember my name...glad that you do...thank you and your very much welcome..

[Lost in Wonderland]

Of course I do:)

[Heather]

You are such a talented writer my dear. I love how you express your yearning in this poem... a romantic fantasy indeed, one I would love as well. Beautiful!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much heather:)
God bless

[.]

Truly wonderfull and beautiful! 100/100 :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[.]

U're welcome! :)

[Hester Vane]

Beautiful. Full of hope.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless