The Deep End (A Song)

Beautiful yesterdays and memories

Is that all we have

Of the past

You and me

 

They said we fit

Just right, perfectly

Were those all lies

Cause you seem just fine

 

To me

Is my heart the only thing

That's been broken piece by piece

Atleast you're still happy

While I'm here trying

To smile...

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

 

Smiles and I love yous

Promising drema come trues

All the pretty deciets

You sang out to me

 

So Paris in the spring

Guess you told her the same thing

You're all our Mr. rights

But you are wrong

 

For me...

Is my heart the only thing

That's been broken piece by piece

At least you're still happy

While I'm here trying

To smile...

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

 

Stop with all the nonsense

Can't we just be friends

So why am I hanging on to you

And falling off the deep end

And you're just laughin'

With her...and her..and her

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

Author's Note

I was thinking about "Cat and Mouse" by Red Jumsuit Apparatus when I wrote this, so go check it out:D Anyways...So yeah this is about the boy who gave me a reason to write poetry a few years ago I stupidly let him toy with my emotions. I'm pretty much over it, Gods healing me, but yeah...enjoy!
God has the glory and ,ay He bless you <3
~Mickey

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Ahh, Cat & Mouse. Vaguely, the song had emerged in my head whilst reading this. Well, I'd say it makes a wondrous poem; yet it is a bit too long lest it is sung in a speedy manner. But then again, if you speed up the lyrics; you would not capture the sorrow expressed within the words. Nonetheless, fine job.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you, and I deleted the first chorus so that may help with the length
God Bless:)

[Hester Vane]

Great job. Repetition is good and i could imagine it in a song.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you
God Bless:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Mickey, Looks like a good lyric, if a little long for a song. If you used the verses alone it would be a decent poem too. One typo 'Promising drema come trues'
'Promising dreams come true' '?

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you, and I noticed that typo too, I'll fix it!
God Bless

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Used to know people like that, bless their hearts. I thought this was a song, I was humming a tune. Beautifully written. God bless

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:) God been good to me; after three years He's healing me

[Brandon S. Whitten]

:) it is a song, you put it in the title..lol..it's past my bedtime

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha yep:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Happy for you:) He is awesome! He set me free, halleluja!

[Lost in Wonderland]

He is so good to me

[Lost in Wonderland]

He comes through when everythig fails:)

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Indeed He does:) Enjoy your evening.

[Lost in Wonderland]

You too