The Deep End (A Song)

Beautiful yesterdays and memories

Is that all we have

Of the past

You and me

 

They said we fit

Just right, perfectly

Were those all lies

Cause you seem just fine

 

To me

Is my heart the only thing

That's been broken piece by piece

Atleast you're still happy

While I'm here trying

To smile...

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

 

Smiles and I love yous

Promising drema come trues

All the pretty deciets

You sang out to me

 

So Paris in the spring

Guess you told her the same thing

You're all our Mr. rights

But you are wrong

 

For me...

Is my heart the only thing

That's been broken piece by piece

At least you're still happy

While I'm here trying

To smile...

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

 

Stop with all the nonsense

Can't we just be friends

So why am I hanging on to you

And falling off the deep end

And you're just laughin'

With her...and her..and her

 

**Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over sung song

 

You're in my head

As I lay down to rest

And I can't get you out of

My mind, I'm going insane

 

Baby you're messing me up

Every night

Every day

 

So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Over-sung song**

Author's Note

I was thinking about "Cat and Mouse" by Red Jumsuit Apparatus when I wrote this, so go check it out:D Anyways...So yeah this is about the boy who gave me a reason to write poetry a few years ago I stupidly let him toy with my emotions. I'm pretty much over it, Gods healing me, but yeah...enjoy!
God has the glory and ,ay He bless you <3
~Mickey

Reviews

[Irvette Dauphine]

loved it!! can i hear this song? :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you, and maybe:)
God bless

[Emma Marie Taylor]

That was beautiful! I loved it!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God bless:)

[Steven Cash]

Never heard Taylor Swift, but this kinda sounds like it could be her...

nice job

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks:)
God bless

[Cole Hayley]

i like the formating, as a song this would realy work. Oversung song is a verry good line. Great work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Oh Wow, Lovely.]

Ha that reminds me of what happened to me! i love your writings :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Soul Fire]

Excellent song! I love it! (: Great work,so relatable and realisitic!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you raya:)
God bless

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome you too

[Belinda]

this is obviously a SONG!. really good. great lyrics.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank u, God bless

[Pax]

i was singing in my head as i read this...the tune in my head is really catchy... i like that song you mention...really well done...you seems to be pretty great in creating lyrics.. keep it up my friend.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much Willyam:)
God Bless

[That_Girl]

"So Please

Don't lead me on

I've had enough of this

Oversung song" - love that part! Great job! :)

[J. Viands]

Always great concepts for lyrics but next time try something like verse, chorus, bridge, verse, chorus, bridge. It might seem bland but it’s what people are the most use to hearing so probably would find more pleasant to read. If you can clearly pull it off I don’t see anyone having any issue with it being too long. Don’t give up being a musician is all about your fan base and taking their criticism just one musician to another… strong word keep going

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you, and I usually do that format (and I deleted the 1st chorus, It did seem very long)
God Bless:)