Good as dead (A song)

A song!

It's been raining for years

Full of heartbreak and fears

And hidden tears

Seems a little bit crazy

 

That know ones sees

Well yay for me

Guess my tricks are working

But I wish they weren't

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

You'll just walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead..

 

You see me smiling and light

You don't know that I've died

I just couldn't breath

Does that make you happy

 

I'm in this dark dance

Do I stand a chance

All alone, no?

So please help me, help me!

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

Would you walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

 

I'm not the girl you see

I'm crying on my knees

The illusions so pretty

Don't tell you the whole story

Of how I let myself get hurt

Beaten down into the dirt

Broken doll in a nice white skirt

Looks just fine to the whole earth...

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

You'll just walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead...

Author's Note

So yeah, is a song about trust issues and being afraid to tell someone you're secrets and sorrows because your afraid they'll leave you. Is something I'm struggling with but God's getting me through it...(slowly)
God has the glory and may He bless you

Reviews

[ShelWars]

Beautiful as always! Well done! I love your work!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:) I appriciate it!

[ShelWars]

Your welcome! No problem!

[Crazy Cat Man]

nice song i can hear this in my head :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Zachary_James]

POST THIS ON YOUTUBE, this was amazing....

[Lost in Wonderland]

I'll try but it'd have to a Capella... Thank you tho!
God bless

[Zachary_James]

Oh your welcome, it was a pleasure reading this.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[Anonymous Girl]

Such a good song. I was singing it as I read through. I think you should sing it and post it on YouTube!
Fabulous!
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you and I might:)
God bless

[Anonymous Girl]

You are welcom and you should :)
God bless you too

[Tai Ryens]

Well, Mickey; being that I dislike reading poetry made of song lyrics without the cords; I'd say I am impressed by this. Rarely do I ever lay my eyes on a poem lands straight on my intellect, and strikes me personally.
Dare I add, congratulations for having found the solutions to your problems, whether it be a slow transition or a quick one.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Tai:)
God bless

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Mickey it has a mournful echo. The opening line 'It's been raining for years' is a good hook as it gets the attention. The use of colloquialism is good 'Well yay for me'

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you John
God Bless

[Pax]

Take things slowly my friend, life is not perfect... its usually imperfect... I like this song very much its like an echo's of my own flies over my head... so i can relate to it.. very much well expressed... GReat!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Willyam, I always appriciate your reviews:)
God Bless

[Pax]

always a pleasure....