Good as dead (A song)

A song!

It's been raining for years

Full of heartbreak and fears

And hidden tears

Seems a little bit crazy

 

That know ones sees

Well yay for me

Guess my tricks are working

But I wish they weren't

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

You'll just walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead..

 

You see me smiling and light

You don't know that I've died

I just couldn't breath

Does that make you happy

 

I'm in this dark dance

Do I stand a chance

All alone, no?

So please help me, help me!

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

Would you walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

 

I'm not the girl you see

I'm crying on my knees

The illusions so pretty

Don't tell you the whole story

Of how I let myself get hurt

Beaten down into the dirt

Broken doll in a nice white skirt

Looks just fine to the whole earth...

 

I'm tired of hiding

All this pain

But if I tell you

You'll just walk away..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead..

 

Don't leave me here screaming

Stranded on the ground

Drowning in my own tears

But you don't hear a sound

No matter how hard I try

It just flies over your head

'Cause I'm Buried 6 feet under

Good as dead

Good as dead...

Author's Note

So yeah, is a song about trust issues and being afraid to tell someone you're secrets and sorrows because your afraid they'll leave you. Is something I'm struggling with but God's getting me through it...(slowly)
God has the glory and may He bless you

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

So you wrote this? Impressive. It inspires me that you are so optimistic about you hardship :) Keep going, girl!

[Poison Ivy]

wow! so much truth and inspiration in one poem!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Irvette Dauphine]

want to hear it!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Maybe I'll put it on my YouTube channel:)

[Irvette Dauphine]

give me the link if u do it :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Will do:)

[Irene]

i want to hear it

[Lost in Wonderland]

I may put a video up...a few people have said they want to hear it

[Irene]

good.

[Heather]

I enjoyed reading this and can relate to trust issues. thank you for sharing this, I can see why its a song.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless

[afra]

very sad write ....but its great ...keep writing

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you afra:)
God Bless

[Hester Vane]

I havent read anything of yours in a while so it was nice to get this RR. Beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this. Trust issues are something everyone has at some point, so its a very relatebale subject well handled in this poem!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Hester:)
God Bless

[TheJordBaker]

so powerful and emotional. the chorus is beautifully haunting. well done, you've taken something close to heart and turned it into a lovely moving piece.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:)
God Bless

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It's been raining for years
Full of heartbreak and fears
And hidden tears
Seems a little bit crazy
Loved that part it was full of emotions somehow! 100/100 :D

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God Bless

[.]

You're welcome! :D

[Cole Hayley]

It really does seem like a song. The chours is strong, and it picks up well in the stanzas. Good job

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you
God bless