Beautiful Despair

I breath in Art

 

Heartbreak's my poetic equation

When life flows hard, I change its path

Using the pain as my inspiration

 

My motto is

Though life isn't always fair 

Choose to see beauty in despair

Author's Note

Poem for english based off Langston Hughes "Motto" structure. Not sure of I like the ending but this is just sticking to the structure, for this site I may add more...
God has the glory

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

Great poem! I really like the moral and concept behind it. Nice job!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks!

[Damien Davison]

`When life flows hard, I change it`s path, using the pain as my inspiration.` I`m sure many of us can connect to these two lines. Very nice.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless

[The Scholar]

I loved this! Am shelving it for sure.
Just the first words "I breathe in art" would have been enough for me, but then you wrote two whole more stanzas. Wonderful.

And I love the picture as well. Life is both tragic and beautiful. A bit paradoxical, but true.

Thank you. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thnak you so much:)
God Bless

[TheJordBaker]

Wonderful, I try to do the same.
You've written a brilliant thing in a brilliant way. I think 'using the pain as my inspiration' will stay with me.

nice work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:)
God Bless

[Poison Ivy]

good motto, :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. like this... :D

[Jetta Zippora]

So lovely, friend.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Jetta:)

[.]

Though this is short its a wonderfull poem! Never give up on your motto! 100/100 Great and enjoyable poetry u write, keep writing! :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much!

[.]

No problem! :)

[Crazy Cat Man]

all great art is made from suffering and so are we - shagrath

[Lost in Wonderland]

That's an awesome quote

[An owl on the moon]

Reminded me of beauty from ashes... the courage to face life head on and to seek the wonders even through the pain and heartbreak that comes our way. You say it so beautifully, and yes, it is a choice...