This is the Year

This is the Year

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland

This is the year

That God finally healed my broken heart

The year I'll refuse to let you rip it apart

We'll just be friends

And I won't fall in love with you again

I'll find a guy who's worth my time an tears

Though he wouldn't dream of ever hurting me

Not in a million years!

Unlike you...

That's all you seem to ever do

But not this time

This is the year that happiness will be mine

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


Author's Note

Lost in Wonderland
so just a rough draft, I'll edit later propbably, so feel free to make suggestions all you wonderful writers:) God Bless
*I don't own the pic*

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Good for you! Awesome! When he turns around, ram your foot up his backside to send him on his way, too! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

haha thanks:) And I just may do that haha
This is the year that you will shine as a poetess...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
I like this poem but i dont like one line

We'll just be friends

nope done be friends..thats just a wedge to be used to check in on you. if ur still single he will make u jealous if he has someone new...or u will be jealous if he finds someone new

cut your losses and move on

great poem



Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you for the suggestion and review:)
God bless
This is great. It inspires me to make this year my year to break free too, honestly!
LOVED lines 2-4

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
optimism and moving on..that's life.
great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

thank you Willyam!
God bless:)
We're all in sync! This is my year too(:
As for suggestions, I think you could find a more original way to say "we'll just be friends," catch the reader's attention maybe :) but I love the feel of your words, triumphant, sort of :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thanks girl! I'll keep that in mind:)

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