The Circus

Wonder in your wide eyes

Mundane expressions now alight

With a smile oh so bright

At the show that's sure to excite

Audiences of young and old

With every ticket that is sold

Girls that fly and playing with fire!

Fills your heart's every desire

Lions and dancers and clowns oh my!

Everything that ever might

Convince you to come on in and join us

At the mystical, marvelous circus

Author's Note

I was bored in English...read it as simply fun, or a dark hypnotic tale...your choice!
God has the Glory and may He bless you <3

Reviews

[C.A. Lucas]

Haha, reading your note, I see it as a sarcastic complaint of the boring English class. :D Nice.

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So true! Great flow and rhytm! 100/100

[Serenity Faith]

Oh wow, I loved this! Have you ever read The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern? You're poem is what it made me think of. If you haven't read the book I would greatly recommend it. It goes with your tastes and styles of writing. Mysterious and marvelous and mundane...the three Ms that come to mind when thinking of the circus we might just have to had a fourth M for Mickey now xD

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much Emily!! ^-^ And I will have to check out that book:)
God Bless

[Cole Hayley]

I liek the carnival feel to it, like an astray feeling. It really is beautiful

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Cole:)
God bless

[ShelWars]

This was really enjoyable to read. Good write!

"read it as simply fun, or a dark hypnotic tale"

I like that. It makes you even more curious about the poem. Well done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)
God has the glory

[Brandon Mathis]

this is a really great poem it brings inside of a circus great write

[That_Girl]

Circuses always scared me... but you brought out a more fun, playful view and I like that. Well, besides the clowns. Nothing anyone does will ever make them fun or playful. :p

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha thanks and clowns are a bit sketchy

[That_Girl]

Ever seen "It"? lol gave me nightmares for months...

[Lost in Wonderland]

no and now i probably never will haha. I dont do well with scary movies..

[That_Girl]

One of the scariest things I have ever experienced... clowns should be illegal...

[Lost in Wonderland]

anything as scary or scarier than woman in black i will refuse to watch .___.

[That_Girl]

Oh that's nothing.. lol stay away from IT. :p

[Lost in Wonderland]

yeah I'm a wimp when it come to horror movies!

[Soul Fire]

Very lovely :D

[Jetta Zippora]

Very playful and thrilling. Great write, friend.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Jetta!

[Rhianne Ney]

Good way of your inspiration keep writing