Won't someone save my soul

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made.

That song came on the radio

I ran out, said I have to go

Reminded me of well you know

Us...and all we could have been

 

You broke my heart just like everyday

Its nothing new, this game you played

And I always seemed to let you win

Why oh why did I ever let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul **

 

I ran arcoss the room and broke down crying

I was love sick, there was no denying

How much I wanted to hold you

Or how much I wished you loved me too

 

My friends went on like nothing was wrong

Like they couldn't hear me singing this song

My hurt was runining me

Why did have to let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul**

 

Should've shut you out

Should've closed that doors

2 years was plenty of time

Why did I give you more

You keep pulling me back

Just watch me fall

With an fake, glass grin

Why did I let you in?

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul

 

Oh oh, save my soul

I never want to let go

So someone please save my soul...

 

Author's Note

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made. God's been good enough to let me use the pain and He has the glory.
God Bless
~Mickey

Reviews

[Rhianne Ney]

Every person that comes in your life comes with a purpose...
Maybe it wasn't clear but I guess that guy made a mark on you and teach you something...
And not all can love one person for a long time.. don't worry he will come someone better than the other..
Good luck (:

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) and this boy did have a purpose, he sparked my desire to write poetry again (even if it was for painful reasons)
God bless
~Mickey

[Rhianne Ney]

God bless too(:

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)

[TheJordBaker]

that chorus is brilliant, really hit me deep. top stuff

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God bless

[Irene]

I would love to hear this played.

[Lost in Wonderland]

If I can learn enough piano or guitar I may write music to it and put it on my youtube account:) sooo fingers crossed:P

[Irene]

i'll be waiting

[Anonymous Girl]

Beautiful song. You did a great job in creating the images. Nice one :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bles

[Anonymous Girl]

My pleasure

[Roxana]

You've got potencial at being a songwriter! 100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Roxana! That would be a dream come tue:)
God Bless

[Roxana]

you're welcome =)

[Hester Vane]

Beautiful chours! I can imagine these lyrics bring coupled with a beautiful piano solo. Well done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Hester! When I master the piano we'll see how that plays out hehe:)
God bless

[Brandon Mathis]

very nicely written i'm the same way most of what i write is written for music but i can't sing all that well but i can play guitar but i just can't sing while i play.

[Lost in Wonderland]

We must be the opposite then since I sing but can't even get my guitar to tune right:P Thank you for the review:)
God Bless

[Pax]

awesome song. love the chorus.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Willyam! Yeah choruses (if thats how you spell it) are usually easier..
God Bless:)

[Pax]

im not sure either.. lol..:) your welcome.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Haha where is spell check when you need it:P

[Pax]

its good that you laugh at simple things to take away the sadness for awhile right. your wearing the smile give us, so dont give up.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)I won't. thank you

[Pax]

sorry, where is the edit button on this..lol :D, guess there's none, i mean your wearing the smile god gives us..

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh haha, I was wondering about that line. And you guy's nice reviews make it easier to wear:)

[afra]

amazing song ....well done

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:) God Bless