Won't someone save my soul

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made.

That song came on the radio

I ran out, said I have to go

Reminded me of well you know

Us...and all we could have been

 

You broke my heart just like everyday

Its nothing new, this game you played

And I always seemed to let you win

Why oh why did I ever let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul **

 

I ran arcoss the room and broke down crying

I was love sick, there was no denying

How much I wanted to hold you

Or how much I wished you loved me too

 

My friends went on like nothing was wrong

Like they couldn't hear me singing this song

My hurt was runining me

Why did have to let you in

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul**

 

Should've shut you out

Should've closed that doors

2 years was plenty of time

Why did I give you more

You keep pulling me back

Just watch me fall

With an fake, glass grin

Why did I let you in?

 

**Chorus

Into my heart

Into to my my mind

Creeping into my thoughts

And my desires

You're arms are so warm

But your heart is so cold

Oh someone please save my soul

 

Why couldn't you ever love me

We were perfect for each other

We'd be so happy

But I guess you were never told

Oh someone please won't you save my soul

 

Oh oh, save my soul

I never want to let go

So someone please save my soul...

 

Author's Note

This is a completely non-fiction song thats about a person who was very important in my life but was probably one of the worst mistakes I made. God's been good enough to let me use the pain and He has the glory.
God Bless
~Mickey

Reviews

[Andorianskye]

i looooove this, it is really good

[Kyle Sky]

Meaningful... what else i can say about such a beautiful piece.

[melissa]

another great piece

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless

[melissa]

welcome!

[benjammingham]

This is was soo great! It makes me feel stupid to say something like this could be great....but honestly it was really beautiful and I could hear tune playing in my head as I read the song....
If you have ever heard of Relient K you should look up the song "I Don't Need a Soul"...its kind of similar....
I hope you dont mind me friend requesting you for this....
Also, I liked how you repeated my twice, but I wasn't sure how that would fit...its all in the way you sing it I guess...

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh i think that was a typo haha. and thank you so much:) and of course i dont mind the FR :D
God Bless

[Drifter]

I am terribly sorry, these words completely relate to me, and as i was reading this i thought of someone who had played me multiple times for over two years actually. Great write.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much, and I'm sorry you could relate:/

[Jetta Zippora]

So beautiful and tragic...I know that feeling. That pain. It's horrible and can destroy you unless you take some control back and stand back up in the Light. This is what I would define as beautiful agony. Well written, friend.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much Jetta, and I'm sorry you have felt this bitter sting as well. Thankfully God has healed my broken heart after 3 years:)

[Drowning with Stars]

I love this

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks girl

[Drowning with Stars]

Gah >.< The review was longer than that, it didn't post :(

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh! I hate when that happens -.-

[The Scholar]

I wish I could hear this with the music. It sounds amazing. Touching, sorrowful write.

My coach told me once that every person in your life, whether you know it or not, contributes something the the creating of who you are. You might not be able to see it at the moment, but years from now, when you look back at it, all the pieces come together and it finally makes sense.

Anyway, that said, this is a wonderful song! You have a talent here

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you do much! If I learn enough guitar or piano I'll write music and put this on my YouTube channel:) and tho this person hurt me, I'd it wasn't for him I wouldn't have found an inspiration for poetry again. So I guess I have to be thankful in a weird way...haha
God bless

[The Scholar]

Well, life is weird sometimes! Or... most of the time. heh :)
God bless you too! I love reading your work.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you! That means a lot:)