L.O.S.T. (acrostic)

This is a mix of acrostic/free form

Are you feeling lost

Like your about to drown?

And no help can be found

Don't know what to do

Need someone to save you

Here's something that may help you too:

 

Look to

Our everlasting Father to

Show you

The way

 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting but I get the jitters with anything that espouses or entreats others to follow a god. I guess its horses for courses. An interesting piece never-the-less

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks, and I get not everyone will agree, but I like spreading the word:)

[afra]

wonderful advice ....thanks for sharing this

[Lost in Wonderland]

No prob:) thanks so much for the review

[dark light]

nice advice

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks for the review
God Bless

[Brandon Mathis]

That was awesome i'm going to try that now

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thanks! I'm sure it'll work for ya:) God's just good that way haha

[Brandon Mathis]

i got one up tell me what you think

[Lost in Wonderland]

I will!

[Brandon Mathis]

kool, thanks!!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

no prob, it was really good!

[C.A. Lucas]

"Like you're about to drown"
So funny. When i hear or see the the word LOST i think of being lost in the middle of the ocean!

[Lost in Wonderland]

haha nicee:) Well even in the ocean you should still look up:) hehe thanks for the review

[Zachary_James]

Thank you for sharing this, for the people who are feeling lost in this crazy world, i love it.

[Lost in Wonderland]

:) thank you
God bless

[Heather]

perfect poem and exactly what I needed at this very second!

[Lost in Wonderland]

I'm glad! Thank you for reading:)
God Bless

[.]

Great poem! Keep's people from getting lost in life. Keep writing! 100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much!
God Bless

[.]

You're welcome!

[Pax]

inspiring words.
thanks for sharing.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks for reviewing:)
God Bless

[Lost in Wonderland]

I like the style you come up with.
For those who believe it's so beautifully said,
Such grace, and love, and light.

E.L.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

It was a pleasure :) as it is always :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

:)