L.O.S.T. (acrostic)

L.O.S.T. (acrostic)

A Poem by Lost in Wonderland
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This is a mix of acrostic/free form

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Are you feeling lost

Like your about to drown?

And no help can be found

Don't know what to do

Need someone to save you

Here's something that may help you too:

 

Look to

Our everlasting Father to

Show you

The way


 

© 2012 Lost in Wonderland


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This was pure genious!!! I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brilliant. So much much truth in this and nicely put. I think this might just stay in my mind for a while.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good poem about God... It's true that when we are lost he will surely guide us to the right path (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
Rhianne Ney

12 Years Ago

God bless too (:
Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

:)
This is both cute and beautiful. It's always nice to have a much-needed little reminder of the love of God. Well-done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God bless
The Scholar

12 Years Ago

Right back at ya :)
Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

:)
Im not a fan of religous poetry , just because I think people use it way to much. But I do like this piece. Good work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Really? I actually don't see that much.. Haha guess I haven't been looking. But thank you for the re.. read more
Well done, Mickey. Brilliant:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Well thank you B.S.W. :)
God Bless
ahhhhhh!!!!! love love love it!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

ahhhh!!! thank you thank you thank you :D
LOVE IT

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you:)
God Bless
This is really strong and outstanding.
Great work!
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
God Bless
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Great! A poem that points to the one who will guide us to the light. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lost in Wonderland

12 Years Ago

thank you :D
God Bless

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Added on August 14, 2012
Last Updated on August 15, 2012
Tags: God, Lost, Christian, Faith

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Lost in Wonderland
Lost in Wonderland

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