I miss you

One of the rare nights I let myself thing about you...

I miss you...

 

I miss what we had

 

I miss the feeling when I grabbed your hand as you tickled me

(which you know I hate)

 But you didn't let go

I was probably blushing like crazy

The thought brings a small smile to my face

 

I miss the cute things you used to tell me

Before I went to sleep that cold night

Wishing you were there to keep me warm

I wanted to spend forever in your arms

 

How I asked you what you were doing

And you so sweetly replied

"Just thinking of you"

I don't think you could imagine

All the butterflies I had inside

 

I miss the way you listened to my nervous rambles

Assuring me with a smile you liked to hear me talk

The feel of your arms around my waist

I thought I finally found my prince

 

I wish I had the strength to tell you,

When you ended it that night,

That no matter how okay I seemed

I was anything but alright!

I miss talking with you for hours

I miss at least being your best friend

Despite all the heartbrake and pain you put me through

Darling, I still miss you...

Author's Note

Tonight was just one of the rare nights I allowed myself to dwell on the boy that I let hurt me for 3 years. I don't know if I like how repetative it is. Leave your comments if you have suggestions to make it better:) Thanks for reading, God has the glory <3
God Bless

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Heh, I write so many poems on this topic... You know, I think that writing a poem is finally releasing yourself... So good job, on that aspect. Nothing wrong here, this poem is truly beautiful and sounds as if it comes straight from the deepest crevices of your broken heart... This is very well done, it brings forth the feelings of despair and nostalgia, maybe some regrets in there too. This poem is just so beautiful, there's nothing to be said against it. Great job!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you so much, and it is definantly a way to cope and let everything go (I thank God for that:) thanks for reading
God bless

[Admiral Kirk]

You are very welcome. :)

[Muse]

I can't critique this...it was written from the hand that was inspired by both pain and heart. I really enjoyed reading you.

Muse

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you muse
God bless:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think many of us have had endings we had no control over. One of my most recent poems is about just that. It is always good (mostly) to express such emotions in a possitive way through poetry. Well done!

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you, and I'll be sure to check out your poem:)
Gob bless

[Pax]

repetative may it seems to everyone but it was intented for emotional purpose.
to state the truth of what you were feeling, and to me thats great.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God bless

[Tai Ryens]

I don't think it was repetitive at all; it was perfect and emotionally powerful. Well done.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Tai:)
God bless

[Jetta Zippora]

I can relate so much to this. It brought tears to my eyes, friend, because I ended a relationship that I felt trapped in and I was not happy. I'm still fighting my head and heart on the past and I regret many things. But this is a nice reminder that we are all human and we all hurt. It helps us grow. Tragic and beautiful, friend. I'm happy you wrote this one. :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much. I guess we all sometimes get the feeling of longing for someone who is unhealthy, yet enticing, for us. But it does help us grow, and it can be used to serve as inspiration haha, this is my little coping mechanism. Again, thank you for the review, I always enjoy hearing from you Jetta:)
God Bless
~Mickey