I miss you

One of the rare nights I let myself thing about you...

I miss you...

 

I miss what we had

 

I miss the feeling when I grabbed your hand as you tickled me

(which you know I hate)

 But you didn't let go

I was probably blushing like crazy

The thought brings a small smile to my face

 

I miss the cute things you used to tell me

Before I went to sleep that cold night

Wishing you were there to keep me warm

I wanted to spend forever in your arms

 

How I asked you what you were doing

And you so sweetly replied

"Just thinking of you"

I don't think you could imagine

All the butterflies I had inside

 

I miss the way you listened to my nervous rambles

Assuring me with a smile you liked to hear me talk

The feel of your arms around my waist

I thought I finally found my prince

 

I wish I had the strength to tell you,

When you ended it that night,

That no matter how okay I seemed

I was anything but alright!

I miss talking with you for hours

I miss at least being your best friend

Despite all the heartbrake and pain you put me through

Darling, I still miss you...

Author's Note

Tonight was just one of the rare nights I allowed myself to dwell on the boy that I let hurt me for 3 years. I don't know if I like how repetative it is. Leave your comments if you have suggestions to make it better:) Thanks for reading, God has the glory <3
God Bless

Reviews

[CeeJei]

I miss talking with you for hours
I miss at least being your best friend
Despite all the heartbrake and pain you put me through
Darling, I still miss you...

i love this part :-)

[Becca Bishop]

This is beautiful :) Repetitive is good because it emphasis the point you want to make over and over so that the reader doesn't forget what you're trying to say. It's ironic that sometimes the things that are most painful are the things we get beauty out of. Thanks for sharing such an amazing piece with us!

[Lost in Wonderland]

aw thank you so much Becca:)
God Bless

[Alyssa Carlstrom]

I can tell that this comes from your heart. I'm sorry for what you went through, nobody deserves it. Nonetheless, this poem is beautiful and you can see the truth in it. Great job!

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you Alyssa:)
God Bless

[C.A. Lucas]

well i've never had a boyfriend but i can tell you have. so much feeling, as always

[Lost in Wonderland]

thanks:) and yeah, this one was definantly not a good example of what a relationship is supposed to be like haha

[C.A. Lucas]

haha! of course not

[SmileBig :)]

Oh.My.God. Everything you just said in that poem I can relate to!! I just loved it to much! Great job, really! :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you!
God Bless:)

[Rose of Gondor]

It doesn't matter if it's repetitive. This is how you feel. There is no way to make it better, because this is you. This is a part of your soul. Thank you, for sharing this with us. It is beautiful.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you very much:) I really appriciate that
God Bless

[Rose of Gondor]

:D

[Lost in Wonderland]

:D

[Irene]

wow. reading this poem made me think of that one "boy" who's also messed me up for three years. that last stanza! oh my it was as if you wrote my thoughts. beautiful poem.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you very much. And if you ever need prayer, or just wanna talk I'm here:) I know How hard this can be...

[Irene]

yes it's very difficult. and prayers are always needed. thank you.

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem:)

[Irene]

much appreciated

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This is so sad and deep, yet amazing.
Excellent job!
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Thank you:)
God Bless
~Mickey

[Speak in Silence]

I have the same thing going on. I can't really tell you if it gets better or not because it's still happening to me. I hope you get over it before I do :) This was an amazing piece.This is beautiful. Situations like you and I are going through bring out the best in my writing skills and obviously yours too. I'm now counting, this is the 6th time I have read it. I don't think this will ever get old.

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you so so much:) And I'm sorry you have to go through this junk too...it sucks right? And if you ever wanna talk or need prayer I'm here:)
God Bless
~Mickey

[Speak in Silence]

You are welcome :) yes, it really does suck. Okay same goes to you, just message me if you wanna talk about anything :)

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you:)

[Speak in Silence]

You're welcome :)

[afra]

so sad and deep ...well done

[Lost in Wonderland]

thank you
God bless