Insermountable Beauty

Insermountable beauty

Bleached rocks stacked like janga

Towering over warter pure blue

If you extend your hand

You can almost touch the sun

 

Higher than the ravens

Talk about a bird's eye view

 

Peacful quiet

The cool whisper of the breeze

Wild life so tame

They'll come up and kiss your finger tips

 

Whistful smiles

This is where dreams are

In thia lovely slice of Heaven

So far away from the troubles of Earth

How could anyone cry here

Where inspiration is never far away

Oh what a beautiful place

Author's Note

Wrote this on the beautiful mountains of Colorado <3

Reviews

[Moniba]

This is very nice, impressive! :)

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is so beautiful and imagery.
I love it!
You are a amazing writer ^_^
100/100

[Lost in Wonderland]

Aw thank you roxast! Always love hearing from you! God has the glory for any talent you find though:)
Thanks for reading!

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^_^ anytime

[Tai Ryens]

I could almost taste the storm "in the lovely slice of heaven." You must not have intended it, but I absorbed it as a rather forshadowing piece . . .

[Lost in Wonderland]

thats why i love writing: its open to interpritation. Thank you for the review:)
God Bless