My Serial Killer Stage...

My Serial Killer Stage...

A Poem by Mickeyboi

started around the age of twelve

with a gift from an eccentric uncle

a book named-

The A-Z of serial killers

I  relished every page

word by gory word

stranglers

spree shooters

stalkers

amazed by tales of acid baths

dismembered limbs in suitcases

and tissue clogged drains

immersed in the deranged

but there were points

when I would stop

freeze dead.

stare at the reflection

of past circumstances

a fatherless childhood

an obsession with fire

domineering matriarchs 

could it be...?

could I really be a...?



Well thirty years have passed

and I haven't yet killed anyone

intentionally.

© 2011 Mickeyboi


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TJ
"and tissue clogged up drains" I'd take the we'd 'up' out of this line.

Wow what an amazing and entertaing read haha. Are you SURE you haven't killed anyone? Maybe you sleepwalk ;) lol

Well unfortunately I've yet to uncover my secret supernatural powers so...we both still have time!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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:)) as some like to say, "the day is still young" - and it's never too late to start...not that i wish you would :).
liked the mixture of humor and mild horror :).

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
"and tissue clogged up drains" I'd take the we'd 'up' out of this line.

Wow what an amazing and entertaing read haha. Are you SURE you haven't killed anyone? Maybe you sleepwalk ;) lol

Well unfortunately I've yet to uncover my secret supernatural powers so...we both still have time!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Errrrm, does that mean you have... unintentionally?
LOL :P
Great read, I could totally realate to it :P hehe.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Buwahahahaha
I think....
I always loved science fiction and I haven't turned into an alien yet either (maybe)
Enjoyed this tremendously :)


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Added on June 5, 2011
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Tags: serial killer, freewrite, contemporary

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Mickeyboi
Mickeyboi

Leeds, Yorkshire, United Kingdom



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I am a 30 year old retired raver from the United Kingdom, who is filling the void that the decay of house music has left... with poetry more..

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