Placement

Find a place within your heart

For this one…

Draw it from within this chest,

And tear it from my precaution,

And from stealing what should be yours,

Make me whole…

Fill it with your living blood

And take mine own morass away…

Let me dance to piper's tune

Of your laughter…

Let last resolve crumble to dust

Under the weight of your eyes…

And cushion fall for falling fiend,

And hope the lady feels the same.

 

Reviews

[Jake Staffeld]

I liked the poem.

[SINDE]

Your choice of words is awesome. Nice write bro.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

awesome!great words here and a very definite feeling...nice one bro, we want more! :D

[Calypso]

Well written

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the flow of the poem and the strong ending.
"Make me whole…
Fill it with your living blood
And take mine own morass away…"
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[rwar ish me]

this is very nice, and sweet

Let last resolve crumble to dust
Under the weight of your eyes…
And cushion fall for falling fiend,
And hope the lady feels the same

these are my favorite lines.